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By: Raymond A.K.A. Hyuugaitachi007
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Prologue
Seven Years after the Great Return
As two blades clashed together, both had no choice but to jump back. The warrior in blue held his gold hilt tightly. The other, however, let his grasp go on his diamond-encrusted sword. He let it slowly slip in his hands; in a second, the foil was in the marble floor.
Give up now; you do not have any more comrades. muttered the warrior in blue.
The other combatant didnt say anything. He placed his hands together. In a moment, sudden wind rushed through the well-built room. His dark and black hair flew with the wind. Oh great Zeus, lend me your power. Bring upon the storms of Olympus and divinely punish this man, who does not know what he has done.
Foolishness! Praying to Zeus!? My, my, you have grown pathetic, Cerebrus.
You do not dare challenge the power of the Gods, now. You know that their powers are to an extent you do not know.
Preposterous! You know for a fact that you cannot call on them. Youre only a mere mortal, like everyone else! Stop dreaming. The Gods have not helped anyone since the Great Return. Face it; this is your last battle.
I am a valiant I fought valiantlyand I will die as a valiant, but not nowI will not die here and now.
As you wish, The warrior in blue gripped his sword on his hand and charged at Cerebrus.
Only a meter away from the enemy, Cerebrus grabbed his sword and slashed his wrist. Blood quickly dropped from his wrist. He then held his sword and raised it up high. Zeus, I offer my blood after you! Bless him with your crushing lightning! Destroy him!
Cerebrus sapphire and thunderbolt-shaped blade glowed blue.
Give it up, oh dear Emperor Cerebrus! The man laughed. He slashed his blade, only to be stopped. His body was sent about ten meters away. With a quick thunderbolt from the Emperors sword, he was blasted away. His chest armor was broken free. Impossibleno one has-
Ever called the Gods nor shared their power since the Great Return,
How did you do that?
Since you are going to die, anywayIll tell you. I wasnt Emperor for nothing, first of all. Besides that I am Olympus.You see I am not just a mere mortal, as you called me. It was wrong of you I would love to explain more, but I suppose it is time. Hades is waiting for you Cerebrus pointed his sword at the far warrior. In a quick jerk, lightning bolts soared through the hall. It struck the warrior in blue in the chest. His mouth opened for a bit, his eyes wide open in surprise and in pain. He was lifeless
And nine years before this exalted battle happened, there was an Empire. An Empire trying to rule what it can rule; this Empire wasnt cruel, like, and yet unlike, it was Olympus on Earth.
More Coming Soon.
Commentary:
Spoiler This was only a flashback. From this point on, the story is going to develop and go into this certain event. However, this doesnt mean that the prologue is the ending of the story. I wish that you liked this first part, and I hope it interested your hearts. The next chapters shall be up soon. Be sure to check out my fan-fic, too.
Chapter One: Battle Between Gods
In the Great Hall of Mount Olympus...
Zeus was quietly sitting on his throne in Olympus. His wise and humongous eagle was on his feet. Scepter in hand, he slowly rose up. Where are my brothers? I have called a meeting an hour ago.
Flames suddenly appeared in the middle of the Olympians Hall. Beyond these flames emerged a tall and dark man. He seemed to be old, however, his muscles and his fierce look told that he is a force to be reckoned with. I am here, oh pleasant brother, muttered Hades, the God of the Underworld sarcastically.
Hades, good. We must talk about something very important. But first, we must wait for our brother Poseidon.
He is always late, scowled the black-eyed Hades. You shall punish him,
And you shant tell me what I should do.
Filthy- Hades was interrupted. Water overflowed from the bronze fountain in the hallway. A figure with a golden trident came visible. It was Poseidon, the God of Seas, Earthquakes and Horses.
My brothers, forgive me if I am late. I was trapped within a problem between the Superior.
Excuses,
Enough, brothers. I have summoned for there is something great that you need to know. My Oracle has told me that when we went into the mortal world, we each had a child. We must gather these children, as the Oracles says.
What if we dont? They are half-mortals, said Hades, fixing his helmet.
They will
Will what, brother? asked Poseidon.
Destroy Olympus. If we do not get to them before they do, the children will be made against us.
They? Whos they?
The titans,
Hah! Has Dionysus wine made you drunk? The Titans are heavily guarded.
Yes, Zeus, we are the ones who did it!
No, these children will set them free if they go to the wrong hands. They have some or more of our powers,
My kid can control the oceans? I doubt it, Poseidon laughed.
This is not a laughing matter,
So, what we must do is save our children, hone them in the best they can be.
And technically, make them Gods, you say?
Yes,
The humungous door of the hallway blast open. Hermes, flying with his winged-sandals, ran straight to Zeus. We have a giant problem! Athena sent me here to tell you that one of the titans has escaped! Perses is gone!
PERSES!? THE SMARTEST OF ALL TITANS? BY THE GATES OF TARTARUS, Zeuss face was raged. It was flushed red. The eagle on his feet flew. Zeus grabbed his lightning bolts and threw them. The sky roared. Call all Olympians, now!
Already here, Zeus. said a giant figure. He had a busty vest, a spear and a sword on his belt. He wore a dark helmet. His steps made powerful blows to the ground. Everyone could here his breath. Zeus, Zeus, Zeus, why didnt you call me when you fellows had a meeting?
I am sorry, Ares- Zeus tried to say until he heard a sharp cry from an eagle was heard. Zeuss eagle along with another eagle appeared. Athena,
The other eagle transformed into a beautiful, yet strong looking woman. She had a spear in her hand. Ares did it! He released Perses! He is the culprit! He has even sent his men to steal your children!
Ares held his spear and threw it at Zeus. Athena immediately interfered. He slashed at Ares. Ares quickly dodged it. He drew his sword and blocked Athenas blows. In a second, more and more of Ares army went in the hall. Hermes flew away to alert other Gods.
Athena, daughter, be careful! Use my lightning bolts if you have to!
Poseidon took care of the army. He plunged his trident on the floor. The earth shook violently. It killed a handful of soldiers.
Hades, on the other hand, tapped his helmet. He became invisible. He the suddenly appeared in the middle of the enemy armada. He created a dark and spinning vacuum that sucked in the soldiers. See you in the Underworld!
Brothers, I will leave and look for Perses. If I do find him, I will need your help. announced Zeus. He seized his thunderbolts and his scepter. Along with him was his forever perched eagle. He flew in the window. He saw that more and more army was pushing in the bottom of Mount Olympus. He threw about twenty thunderbolts. They hit the army sadistically. All of them ran away. Foolish mortals. How dare them challenge the powers of Olympus.
While he was flying, he saw Apollos chariot arriving. Zeus, I took care of the beasts in the sky. What has happened?
Hermes will tell you. Now go to Olympus and aid them!
More coming soon...
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Topic: Olympus' Valiant
Posted on March 15, 2009 00:56
