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  Posted on August 15, 2015 14:24
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"Untitled"


I’d tell people not to bother me sometimes, but? No one ever does.
This irony is suffocating at times, but? Then again, so is thinking about this.

Will this ever stop isn’t the question, rather, can it.
People just complicate the situations already at hand.

And? The only hope seems to lie in the individuals, the castaways.
The ones deemed unfit, unsuited for this modern living.

So, I’ll ask you. Take me back,
Take me back to the solitude.
The emptiness which brought me to this point to begin with.

Just maybe, maybe there’ll be peace accompanied by this numbness.


More journal writing. hope you enjoy.
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  Posted on August 15, 2015 17:34
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perfect
  Posted on August 16, 2015 00:37
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Ow nice
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  Posted on August 16, 2015 00:39
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Umm I'm not good at this kind of stuff but shouldn't there be some rhymes?
anyway.. good job. i guess.
  Posted on August 16, 2015 12:59
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BleachMaster13 wrote:
Umm I'm not good at this kind of stuff but shouldn't there be some rhymes?
anyway.. good job. i guess.

Poetry doesn't necessarily need to have rhymes.
  Posted on December 31, 2015 03:37
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Needs more rhymes, just kidding
  Posted on January 11, 2017 17:36
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pure-kill wrote:
I’d tell people not to bother me sometimes, but? No one ever does.

Right in the feels

You´re right: thinking too much just complicate things. By imagining all the worst scenarios we stop ourselves from doing or saying certain things that probably would´d be that bad. And, pherhaps, they might turn out to be good after all. We are full of doubts!

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And? The only hope seems to lie in the individuals, the castaways.
The ones deemed unfit, unsuited for this modern living.


Well, it has always been I guess. The world is full of ordinary people. Its always (ok, not always, but almost) "different" people who make an impact in the world. People who buck the system
"We drink too much, smoke too much, spend too recklessly, laugh too little, drive too fast, get too angry, stay up too late, get up too tired, read too little, watch TV too much, and pray too seldom. We have multiplied our possessions, but reduced our values. We talk too much, love too seldom, and hate too often. We’ve learned how to make a living, but not a life. We’ve added years to life not life to years. " - George Carlin

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