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  Posted on August 21, 2015 03:35
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She had green eyes and a taste of cantaloupe on her lips.
Now you’ll ask, did she steal anything of value from me? And I’ll answer simply no,
but I did give it all away. My value was all in you, or rather, I should say her.

But, now you appear to have found a new light,
I guess my shadow must’ve darkened the delicate parts of you.

And? I have found no logical reason for apologizing,
I am not always as people will describe me as. I am but a person,
a no one, endlessly searching for my someone.

So, off I will go, until an individual reappears.
Until I am left to once again question why I’d ever attempt to go throughout this world.
Without another hand to hold.


More journal writing. hope you enjoy.
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  Posted on August 21, 2015 04:15
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another perfect poetry
  Posted on August 21, 2015 06:29
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You're still one of my favorites to follow in this writing section

Some bore me but yours never do

Nice work !
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  Posted on August 21, 2015 11:12
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Nice work.
  Posted on September 2, 2015 14:24
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Pretty dope.
  Posted on December 29, 2015 12:26
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Reminds me of another writing style I found on nosleep, good one
  Posted on January 11, 2017 18:14
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pure-kill wrote:
Now you’ll ask, did she steal anything of value from me? And I’ll answer simply no,
but I did give it all away.

You´re a kind person :) Giving just because you can and/or because you want. I didn´t lose my faith in this world thanks to people like you, so, thank you ^_^

pure-kill wrote:
But, now you appear to have found a new light,
I guess my shadow must’ve darkened the delicate parts of you.

Its very painful when you give everything you have and everything you are and get nothing in return. Not that we give it in order to gain something; but to see that the other person is not there for us. It really hurts.

pure-kill wrote:
And? I have found no logical reason for apologizing,
I am not always as people will describe me as. I am but a person,
a no one, endlessly searching for my someone.

You haven´t found because there isn´t. You´re not wrong here. Don´t apologise. I know it completely breaks your heart but we have to continue be kind and generous, otherwise the world will be lost. Nothing beats love; nothing beats kindness. Without it, people won´t have the strenght to go forward and face the day.

pure-kill wrote:
So, off I will go, until an individual reappears.
Until I am left to once again question why I’d ever attempt to go throughout this world.
Without another hand to hold.

This is me right now. Stay strong, I wish everything good to you :)
"We drink too much, smoke too much, spend too recklessly, laugh too little, drive too fast, get too angry, stay up too late, get up too tired, read too little, watch TV too much, and pray too seldom. We have multiplied our possessions, but reduced our values. We talk too much, love too seldom, and hate too often. We’ve learned how to make a living, but not a life. We’ve added years to life not life to years. " - George Carlin

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