The Meaning of Love

BlazeHero Rank: member Forum Rank: Lieutenant Posts: 2351 Joined on: January 7, 2009

#1 My latest poem, just wrote what I felt. Rate and comment (Mustly comment). The Meaning of Love The strongest word I've ever heard One syllable, and four letters As strong has an ox, and as meaningful as a mother's care towards her child Yet with qualities as low as those of the bitterest criminal A contradiction to the word hate, yet we can't grasp either We say "I love you" and "Love is the best thing ever" But, how many of us have actually felt this feeling The butterflies in your stomach, the blushes of your cheeks When you say you love something, You've lied because you can't experience love without hate Love, the couples always smiling, The princess always dreaming Cinderella and Prince Charming When I hear him say "I love you" to her... I know he means it, for to be with someone and care for them... No not care, but to just be with them and care to say the simplest "Hi" or "Good night" That is love, the love I wish I'd have! The Meaning of Love ~!Poetry Showcase!~ Quote by Blazehero Random is not art, Art is random Blue is black under the shine of the moon ...:::::Shadow~Strategists:::::... Dedication is the will to never back down, it is the will that I will never lose!

Ambition Rank: member Forum Rank: 5th seat Posts: 824 Joined on: January 14, 2009

#2 Quote by BlazeHero My latest poem, just wrote what I felt. Rate and comment (Mustly comment). The Meaning of Love The strongest word I've ever heard One syllable, and four letters As strong has an ox, and as meaningful as a mother's care towards her child Yet with qualities as low as those of the bitterest criminal A contradiction to the word hate, yet we can't grasp either We say "I love you" and "Love is the best thing ever" But, how many of us have actually felt this feeling The butterflies in your stomach, the blushes of your cheeks When you say you love something, You've lied because you can't experience love without hate Love, the couples always smiling, The princess always dreaming Cinderella and Prince Charming When I hear him say "I love you" to her... I know he means it, for to be with someone and care for them... No not care, but to just be with them and care to say the simplest "Hi" or "Good night" That is love, the love I wish I'd have! Nice poem i really like.Wish you wrote this earlier so i could of used it on a homework Thanks Lost_in_Dreams<3 I am the author of my life, Unfortunately I am writing in pen, So I cant erase my mistakes. Tupac Shakur [/u]

DeadSight Rank: member Forum Rank: Lieutenant Posts: 2350 Joined on: January 7, 2009

#3 Awesome poem, love the freeform and punctuation to create a rhythm that is strong enough to be felt, but still subtle enough to let the poem flow. Great job. Writing Showcase . Clan Topic . Clanless Hall Chat My Avatar Tutorials For Beginners ; Avatar Text Tutorial . Avatar Tutorial Longest & Funniest Thread - uRIP uDIE - My sig is old, bitch and die.

-T- Rank: member Forum Rank: Ryoka Posts: 526 Joined on: January 14, 2009

#4 Aww... completely ironic with that ava of yours But very good. Complex poems are needed for complex emotions. Quote by Ambition Quote by BlazeHero My latest poem, just wrote what I felt. Rate and comment (Mustly comment). The Meaning of Love The strongest word I've ever heard One syllable, and four letters As strong has an ox, and as meaningful as a mother's care towards her child Yet with qualities as low as those of the bitterest criminal A contradiction to the word hate, yet we can't grasp either We say "I love you" and "Love is the best thing ever" But, how many of us have actually felt this feeling The butterflies in your stomach, the blushes of your cheeks When you say you love something, You've lied because you can't experience love without hate Love, the couples always smiling, The princess always dreaming Cinderella and Prince Charming When I hear him say "I love you" to her... I know he means it, for to be with someone and care for them... No not care, but to just be with them and care to say the simplest "Hi" or "Good night" That is love, the love I wish I'd have! 2100 posts dang you have a "social Life" Makin poems and cutting urself all the time Please stop this. All I've seen you do here is cut other people down.

Ambition Rank: member Forum Rank: 5th seat Posts: 824 Joined on: January 14, 2009

#5 Quote by DeadSight Awesome poem, love the freeform and punctuation to create a rhythm that is strong enough to be felt, but still subtle enough to let the poem flow. Great job. Thought you quit? Ontopic;You should make a poem guide Thanks Lost_in_Dreams<3 I am the author of my life, Unfortunately I am writing in pen, So I cant erase my mistakes. Tupac Shakur [/u]

Lady_Hinata Rank: member Forum Rank: Lieutenant Posts: 2212 Joined on: January 14, 2009

#6 "The butterflies in your stomach, the blushes of your cheeks" I love that line.Good poem though.

-Hawk Rank: member Forum Rank: Ryoka Posts: 302 Joined on: December 19, 2009

#7 Wow your poem is fantastic, nice job ^^ "Is there hope for us? Can we make it out alive? I can taste the failure on your lips..."

BlazeHero Rank: member Forum Rank: Lieutenant Posts: 2351 Joined on: January 7, 2009

#8 @ DeadSight thanks for the feedback @ -T- I would agree. @ Ambition reported. The Meaning of Love ~!Poetry Showcase!~ Quote by Blazehero Random is not art, Art is random Blue is black under the shine of the moon ...:::::Shadow~Strategists:::::... Dedication is the will to never back down, it is the will that I will never lose!

kenpachi_15 Rank: member Forum Rank: Lieutenant Posts: 1753 Joined on: February 5, 2009

#9 u should have made it a few day ealier so i could copy it and used as my love poem homeowrk i got C on my <.< edit: very nice

Ambition Rank: member Forum Rank: 5th seat Posts: 824 Joined on: January 14, 2009

#10 Quote by BlazeHero @ DeadSight thanks for the feedback @ -T- I would agree. @ Ambition reported. Lol what is that going to do for your life honestly? Why would u report me? Thanks Lost_in_Dreams<3 I am the author of my life, Unfortunately I am writing in pen, So I cant erase my mistakes. Tupac Shakur [/u]

BlazeHero Rank: member Forum Rank: Lieutenant Posts: 2351 Joined on: January 7, 2009

#11 Quote by kenpachi_15 u should have made it a few day ealier so i could copy it and used as my love poem homeowrk i got C on my <.< edit: very nice I'm glad it is good enough for you to want to use it for your homework. The Meaning of Love ~!Poetry Showcase!~ Quote by Blazehero Random is not art, Art is random Blue is black under the shine of the moon ...:::::Shadow~Strategists:::::... Dedication is the will to never back down, it is the will that I will never lose!

DeadSight Rank: member Forum Rank: Lieutenant Posts: 2350 Joined on: January 7, 2009

#12 Quote by Ambition Thought you quit? You would be? a fan i'm guessing never "quit", if you read my topic i said "going inactive" and i still sort of em. Actually i did quit the game, just not boards, which i am quite inactive on. But that is a discussion on another thread. Writing Showcase . Clan Topic . Clanless Hall Chat My Avatar Tutorials For Beginners ; Avatar Text Tutorial . Avatar Tutorial Longest & Funniest Thread - uRIP uDIE - My sig is old, bitch and die.

Ambition Rank: member Forum Rank: 5th seat Posts: 824 Joined on: January 14, 2009

#13 Quote by DeadSight Quote by Ambition Thought you quit? You would be? a fan i'm guessing never "quit", if you read my topic i said "going inactive" and i still sort of em. Actually i did quit the game, just not boards, which i am quite inactive on. But that is a discussion on another thread. Sorry i didn't pay much attention. I always had discussions with you.Not a fan. Sorry for getting off topic didn't mean to. Thanks Lost_in_Dreams<3 I am the author of my life, Unfortunately I am writing in pen, So I cant erase my mistakes. Tupac Shakur [/u]

woody Rank: member Forum Rank: 5th seat Posts: 675 Joined on: January 14, 2009

#14 nice poem dude 7/10 << sig by kuro there's never been anybody as ruthless. I'm Sonny Liston, I'm Jack Dempsey, there's no one like me - I'm from their cloth. There's no one that can match me! My style is impetuous, my defense is impregnable, and I'm just ferocious! I want your heart! I want to eat his children! Praise be to Allah!"

ShadowFace Rank: member Forum Rank: 3rd seat Posts: 1439 Joined on: January 15, 2009

#15 Nicee Poem Blazee! Cnt w8 'till X-mas! .:Noob Gfxer:.

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