The Meaning of Love

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Posted on December 22, 2009 01:42

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My latest poem, just wrote what I felt.

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The Meaning of Love

The strongest word I've ever heard
One syllable, and four letters
As strong has an ox, and as meaningful as a mother's care towards her child
Yet with qualities as low as those of the bitterest criminal

A contradiction to the word hate, yet we can't grasp either
We say "I love you" and "Love is the best thing ever"
But, how many of us have actually felt this feeling
The butterflies in your stomach, the blushes of your cheeks
When you say you love something,
You've lied because you can't experience love without hate

Love, the couples always smiling,
The princess always dreaming
Cinderella and Prince Charming

When I hear him say "I love you" to her...
I know he means it, for to be with someone and care for them...
No not care, but to just be with them and care to say the simplest "Hi" or "Good night"
That is love, the love I wish I'd have!

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Posted on December 22, 2009 01:45

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Quote by BlazeHero

My latest poem, just wrote what I felt.

Nice poem i really like.Wish you wrote this earlier so i could of used it on a homework

Thanks Lost_in_Dreams<3

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Posted on December 22, 2009 01:46

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Awesome poem, love the freeform and punctuation to create a rhythm that is strong enough to be felt, but still subtle enough to let the poem flow. Great job.

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Posted on December 22, 2009 01:46

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Aww... completely ironic with that ava of yours

But very good. Complex poems are needed for complex emotions.

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My latest poem, just wrote what I felt.

2100 posts dang you have a "social Life"
Makin poems and cutting urself all the time

Please stop this. All I've seen you do here is cut other people down.

Posted on December 22, 2009 01:46

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Awesome poem, love the freeform and punctuation to create a rhythm that is strong enough to be felt, but still subtle enough to let the poem flow. Great job.

Thought you quit?
Ontopic;You should make a poem guide

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Posted on December 22, 2009 01:47

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"The butterflies in your stomach, the blushes of your cheeks"
I love that line.Good poem though.

Credits to Kiki for the ava. <3

Posted on December 22, 2009 01:47

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Wow your poem is fantastic, nice job ^^

ll It's pills to more thrills I'm lucky if I survive, I'm high.. ll
ll Nathalia034_1 made the avy (: ll Fall In love with this song (: ll

Posted on December 22, 2009 01:48

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@ DeadSight thanks for the feedback
@ -T- I would agree.
@ Ambition reported.

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Posted on December 22, 2009 01:48

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u should have made it a few day ealier so i could copy it and used as my love poem homeowrk

i got C on my <.<
edit: very nice

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Posted on December 22, 2009 01:50

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@ DeadSight thanks for the feedback
@ -T- I would agree.
@ Ambition reported.

Lol what is that going to do for your life honestly?
Why would u report me?

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Posted on December 22, 2009 01:50

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u should have made it a few day ealier so i could copy it and used as my love poem homeowrk

i got C on my <.<
edit: very nice

I'm glad it is good enough for you to want to use it for your homework.

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Posted on December 22, 2009 01:51

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Thought you quit?

You would be? a fan i'm guessing

never "quit", if you read my topic i said "going inactive" and i still sort of em. Actually i did quit the game, just not boards, which i am quite inactive on. But that is a discussion on another thread.

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Posted on December 22, 2009 01:52

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Thought you quit?

You would be? a fan i'm guessing

Sorry i didn't pay much attention.
I always had discussions with you.Not a fan.
Sorry for getting off topic didn't mean to.